厘浪散歪爺哂囂


　　Summer
　　
　　Deng Xiaozhong
　　
　　Summer arrived, I with respect to too impatient to wait eat ice cream and travel, bathe cold water. Summer is very hot, I do not eat 10 ice cream one day to be able to be heated up dead by summer. Our teacher takes stone to give us today, we do 9 idiom. I and yellow Xin eaves, Li Yan a group, I and yellow Xin eaves did a lot of idiom, li Yan was done very few, we a group finish the first times 9 idiom, I am very happy today, I like summer. 
　　
　　Judge: The language is clear and coherent. 
　　
　　Summer
　　
　　Fang Zhaoyi
　　
　　In this one summer, I learn to write a composition iposition class. 
　　
　　In the house of this white wall, we pile stone in this place, go searching many a stone in a pouch, final pitch on the roundest the biggest stone. 
　　
　　I piled a penguin, but the again and again is flat, rose again again. I had piled up it finally. Call a teacher to look immediately, but the teacher does not come tardy, when I am disappointed, the teacher came however. 
　　
　　My penguin was patted finally. 
　　
　　Judge: Keep the business that was clear that oneself had been experienced, this game of summer is interesting! 
　　
　　I love summer
　　
　　Huang Xinyu
　　
　　Summer arrived, a lot of people played to the outside. Summer is very hot, everybody wears very few dress, besides fool ability can wear a lot of dresses. Summer can swim, eat ice-lolly and bathe cold water to wait. 
　　
　　For instance, a few days ago very hot, I ate a few ice-lolly and a few ice to僉徭.互嶄恬猟 
　　
　　 stimulate drench. Eat so that my mouth resembles iced mouth. 
　　
　　For instance, very hot yesterday, and I went cinema. I gave kubla khah, after coming home, I bathed, after be being washed, I feel very cool. Next I slept. 
　　
　　I love summer! 
　　
　　Judge: It is to like summer really, ability can be written so sentiently.